Comic 69 - #64

4th Sep 2021, 12:45 AM in Book One, Chapter Three: Changes
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4th Sep 2021, 12:45 AM
In the original story, CT said "you all do". Funny how changing a single word, can change the entire perspective.


4th Sep 2021, 1:15 AM
Your fault.
There is a hebrew proverb:
״להצלחה אבות רבים, אבל הכשלון יתום„
the success has a lot of fathers, but the failure is an orphan.
People are quick to present themselves as responsible when the results are positive, but refrain from taking responsibility when the results are negative.
When they are negative, people will blame eachother instead of dealing with the problem.
4th Sep 2021, 1:51 AM
That's the scene in a nutshell. I purposely changed his wording from "you" to "we", to include himself, showing that in some way he does realize that he's at fault.
4th Sep 2021, 4:56 PM
Yeah!!! Wow changing that to "we" really casts a cool spin on this, glad you made the change
5th Sep 2021, 6:22 PM
I never liked the sympathetic villain trope, so I find myself making more and more minor changes to make CT feel less like a villain, and more like somebody going through all the stages of grief.